Crashing like thunder,buildings were falling one by one was cover.As quick as a flash,smoke was covering the whole place. As dark as a cave,nearly all the city was burnt to death.Boiling ash was scattered all over the place.
Crashing like thunder,buildings were falling one by one was cover.As quick as a flash,smoke was covering the whole place. As dark as a cave,nearly all the city was burnt to death.Boiling ash was scattered all over the place.
THAT IS AMAZING
That was fabulous
Nice work Callum I love your writing and the adjectives are great